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Reporting tools / Lesson 25

Open strongly and end precisely

An article’s first and last sentences carry particular weight: one invites the reader in, the other shapes what remains. Strong openings and endings depend on the same discipline as the rest of the story: clear structure, concrete words and one idea at a time.

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The essentials

Choose a plan and follow it. Give each paragraph one idea, prefer active verbs and remove words that do no work. Use precise, concrete language that helps readers form an image. Avoid chains of subordinate clauses. Important words gain force at the end of a sentence, where the eye and ear naturally pause.

The opening should seize attention, not announce that an article is about to begin. A scene, a striking verified fact, a tension or a question can bring the audience straight into the subject. Administrative preambles delay that encounter. Your first sentence must still fit the reporting: drama does not justify a promise the evidence cannot fulfil.

The ending closes the angle. A close detail, a scene or an exact quotation can do more than a broad final lecture. Do not repeat the entire argument or tell the reader what moral to take away. A good ending may leave a door open to a further question while completing the specific story you set out to tell.

Take it to the field

Read only the first and last sentences. Does the first make you want to know more? Does the last close the angle? Remove routine launch phrases and endings that simply repeat what the reader has already understood.

Your turn

Revisit three of your articles and remove the opening paragraph from each. Does the story begin more effectively with the second? Compare the versions before deciding what information the opening truly needs.

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